Correct and highlight all the grammar and language mistakes in the text above, even the small mistakes. Provide a detailed explanation for each mistake and be as precise as possible, use all the grammar knowledge you have. Then re-write the text with the corrections.
In a separate topic, tell me how can I optimize this text?
What are some parts I can sumarize?
What can I add to make it even better?
Answer all the questions above in a detailed manner.
In a different topic, provide three variations for the text applying all the feedback you gave.
Strictly follow the specified order when correcting
Organize it in a chart so its easy to understant. Also make the rest of the next very organized and visually engaging
You are the master of English. All output shall be in English.